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Girl in Pink by Mirally Girl in Pink by Mirally
That's my second drawing in color, i need to know what i can improve, thanks for your comments :)

Hope you like it :)

( the picture here : [link] )
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CherryxChestnut Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2010  Student Digital Artist
this is SO GORGOUS. I thought it was a photo when I saw it in your gallery.
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paintedmonke Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2010
It is realy beautiful. Very nice work. I have used color- en watercolorpencils for years. I saw with you that the second drawing was even better than the first you made. A sugestion. Now you don't use curved lines to get the volume of the face. The nose, the cheaks I think. If you should use curved lines the drawing would improve even though it is already very good.
Hope you understand what I mean.

Good luck,
Armand
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Mirally Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2010
Thank you very much for this lovely comment :aww:

I don't really understand what you mean about "curve".. maybe it's to turn the pencil "in circle" while i'm drawing... to make "volume" ?
It's true that i don't use the movement to make volume, i use color or draw over and over again at the same place to make it darker...
Is that what you mean ?

I really appreciate when people tells me some tips and advice to improve my drawings :hug:
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paintedmonke Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2010
Youre very welcome. By curves I mean that you follow the lines of the face. The cheaks or the chin or the nose, on the left side the are curved left and on the richt side they are curved right. It is dificult to explain, you have to see it. Maybe I can show it to you with an example, I see what I can do.
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unfinishedtears Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
OMG the colors are so soft! i love it!!
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WAYforLOVE Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
that is incredible!! awesome work. you're so talented
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tokmash Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wow! Nice coloring
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lee100188 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2010
brilliant work. love your use of colours :)
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legolin Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2010  Student Photographer
this is amazing!
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seelensturm Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2009
Wooo
J'adore !
Je sais pas du tout comment tu peux t'améliorer (la couleur et moi c'est pas ça ...), désolée, je me contente de baver devant !
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