It is realy beautiful. Very nice work. I have used color- en watercolorpencils for years. I saw with you that the second drawing was even better than the first you made. A sugestion. Now you don't use curved lines to get the volume of the face. The nose, the cheaks I think. If you should use curved lines the drawing would improve even though it is already very good. Hope you understand what I mean.
I don't really understand what you mean about "curve".. maybe it's to turn the pencil "in circle" while i'm drawing... to make "volume" ? It's true that i don't use the movement to make volume, i use color or draw over and over again at the same place to make it darker... Is that what you mean ?
I really appreciate when people tells me some tips and advice to improve my drawings
Youre very welcome. By curves I mean that you follow the lines of the face. The cheaks or the chin or the nose, on the left side the are curved left and on the richt side they are curved right. It is dificult to explain, you have to see it. Maybe I can show it to you with an example, I see what I can do.